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  • Sylvia Love Johnson

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    February 2, 2022 at 12:48 pm in reply to: Day 1 Assignment

    What I Learnt: The less information I give the better it reads

    Longline:

    Amid the preparation of her 15th birthday while coping with the loss of her father to murder the Joan of Arc in a Futuristic post Apocalyptic Era, Janelle Montana secretly assumes leadership to protect humankind against a diabolical mind-control plan, an infectious deadly disease caused by moonlight and unseen legendary monstrous enemies residing on 3030 Planet Earth.

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    Over the last decade, hundreds of children and teens have disappeared. When the leader of “This World” dies the enemies of the new central Government seek to overthrow it by killing his successor.

    Jannelle the current incarnation of Joan of Arc.

    Her 15th birthday party is at the core of the action. In the midst of “plotting” a birthday party, we learn that there is something greater at stake beyond a teen’s birthday do. The party is the cover of a big Governmental operation to bring her father’s killers to justice and to expose the child snatchers.

    The main villain, and suspected kidnapper is the leader of “The Other World” from a race of unseen beasts sea inhabitants descendants, occupying half the planet. They are highly advanced. However, Jannelle has countless enemies within the human domain, the post-apocalyptic world Mafia bosses of the “Human domain Territory” or “This World” who set about gambling the world ‘s assets in a game of poker, there is speculation proposing that Roberto Montana might be alive and secretly pulling strings.

    Later all the mafia bosses lose all their current territory and assets to mysterious and unexpected law enforcement raids. During her birthday, Clarisse; a very close friend of hers is also taken. Frustrated Janelle sets off on an unplanned mission to finish what her father started and unfold the mystery of the kidnappings. She suspects of “The Others” and goes full force against them. Skipping the necessary intelligence process. She intents to take The Others by surprise yet the surprise will hit her much stronger than she could have imagined.

    Defeated by the Others she is returned home only to find that those betraying her are much closer to home than she thought.

  • Sylvia Love Johnson

    Member
    January 31, 2022 at 2:45 pm in reply to: Confidentiality Agreement

    Sylvia Love Johnson

    As a member of this group, I agree to the following:

    1. That I will keep the processes, strategies, teleconferences, communications, lessons, and models of the class confidential, and that I will NOT share any of this program either privately, with a group, posting online, writing articles, through video or computer programming, or in any other way that would make those processes, teleconferences, communications, lessons, and models of the class available to anyone who is not a member of this class.

    2. That each writer’s work here is copyrighted and that writer is the sole owner of that work. That includes this program which is copyrighted by Hal Croasmun. I acknowledge that submission of an idea to this group constitutes a claim of and the recognition of ownership of that idea.

    I will keep the other writer’s ideas and writing confidential and will not share this information with anyone without the express written permission of the writer/owner. I will not market or even discuss this information with anyone outside this group.

    3. I also understand that many stories and ideas are similar and/or have common themes and from time to time, two or more people can independently and simultaneously generate the same concept or movie idea.

    4. If I have an idea that is the same as or very similar to another group member’s idea, I’ll immediately contact Hal and present proof that I had this idea prior to the beginning of the class. If Hal deems them to be the same idea or close enough to cause harm to either party, he’ll request both parties to present another concept for the class.

    5. If you don’t present proof to Hal that you have the same idea as another person, you agree that all ideas presented to this group are the sole ownership of the person who presented them and you will not write or market another group member’s ideas.

    6. Finally, I agree not to bring suit against anyone in this group for any reason, unless they use a substantial portion of my copyrighted work in a manner that is public and/or that prevents me from marketing my script by shopping it to production companies, agents, managers, actors, networks, studios or any other entertainment industry organizations or people.

    This completes the Group Release Form for the class.

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