Tools to move to the next level

I am in the midst of a rewrite of a script that shows great promise based on the feedback from two festivals. The lessons in this course have helped me tighten up the dialogue, improve the action and in general greatly improved the entertainment value of the script. Combined with the last two classes from Hal, I am feeling more comfortable with the expectations of the industry.

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